Topic: need some feedback on some songs

Hi there guys, would like some feedback on some of my bands songs! we are a modern rock band and I play guitar.
Thanks.
https://[youtube]/watch?v=woBnVi7zXbA&feature=youtube_gdata_player[/youtube]
https://[youtube]/watch?v=irBJfG0eeJw&feature=youtube_gdata_player[/youtube]

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Re: need some feedback on some songs

Its not my genre...but youve got something....you know a bit about structuring a tune...but it requires ...I hate to be too critical...finesse, refinement...some of the best blasts that sound like they were born in utter chaos are really well structured, defined, ooze finesse and yet sound like they were generated with absolute wild abandon. Over heavy bordering on burden gain on the guitar which could of actually  sounded more defined and raw/fresh by being simply less in your face.  Interesting sounds though ...

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pros: well played ..well recorded ...heavy metal at a high standard
cons: non really ( IMO )

suggestions: if its an opinion about the song ( s )
then post an acoustic version of it ( them )
..ruling out any genre issues

all in all ...good sound...ROCK ON!

EDIT: on a second listen the first song sounds like it could stand up
away from the heavy metal environment (as gar tint  i too  am not into heavy metal )

perhaps some heavy metallers would care to comment

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The first song is almost what I term Cali rock....Same as the second song...

All in all enjoyable to listen to...What daw did you use....

Imagine if the words of Imagine ever came true.....

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Re: need some feedback on some songs

I can`t cast a critical comment to your playing as i have no real guitar playing ability. I  would say though, if went to watch a band, i wouldn`t be unhappy to see you on the guitar

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Re: need some feedback on some songs

I enjoyed listening - it certainly sounds well produced and recorded.